Spider-Woman WIP

[Killer]

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[Ultiɱℯciɑ]

It's a bit weird, I think the action line is a bit unaligned Just look at the "central line" during the last frames, from her shoulder to her knee and then to her feet. Her torso twists a bit too much and her right leg "grows" a bit I'm not sure how to explain any better

[Okami]

Basically the proportionality of the body parts aren't proportional to each other in each of the describe frames. Btw, i don't think the left leg moves that fast during a normal punch o-o

[Killer]

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[Ultiɱℯciɑ]

Much better, but I still think her right leg (left ) looks a bit weird

[Hollowlife]

Much better, but I still think her right leg (left ) looks a bit weird

Agreed

[Killer]

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[Ultiɱℯciɑ]

The arm holding the whip makes an "arch" while moving, yours looks too straight Of course, see how she moves her back leg even further back and her front for more balance and whip harder. The current animation isn't possible to do, if you try it IRL I think you'd be right with your face on the floor :p

[Laharl]

hmmm I dont know.... I am not feeling the shooting part from her I mean I cant even picture or recall having spiderwoman doing a beam shot :/

she does have a beam shot he didn't do that custom thats one of her super powers.

[Uberkoala]

I'm glad you give her the Venom Blast power. NO ONE ever seems to know that she has that power.

[Killer]

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[Yumaki]

looks pretty cool in my opinion

[Killer]

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[Yumaki]

man? lol if only...lmao

[Killer]

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[raremew]

The old one..

[Uberkoala]

You could make her alternate between the two.

[raremew]

True...