Алексей Posted July 13, 2014 Posted July 13, 2014 I posted this over at MFG first, but I'll post it here too: Hey everyone, For my game, NZCR, I'm recreating the lifebars and would like some advice and how I can improve them. Here's what I've done so far, but I feel it's lacking. I'm going to keep working on it, but I need different opinions. Even if it looks like shit to you, please tell me why. The old and current: The new: Some features that need to be there: - Indication of how many times you can do Kawarimi Substitute (the log). - Indication that you can go into Chak-rush mode, when it's ready. P.S. I'll move this into the game's subforum after some time has passed. -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Demitri Posted July 13, 2014 Posted July 13, 2014 Maybe some clouds? like in many of the naruto games maybe a scroll behind the timer? cant really think of much else, unless you overhaul the bars in general If you want my released works, go here.
Алексей Posted July 13, 2014 Author Posted July 13, 2014 Yeah, I was thinking that something needed to behind them as well. I tried drawing clouds and failed miserably, lol. I'm a shitty artist, I know. Well, I don't mind doing a complete overhaul, but it's gotta match Naruto, not look like something that belongs in Blaz Blue :P -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Egnaro Posted July 13, 2014 Posted July 13, 2014 Hmm it seems you are making things similar to the Ultimate Ninja Storm series(saying that because of the life bars and subs). It looks nice though man, what is chak-rush though?
Алексей Posted July 13, 2014 Author Posted July 13, 2014 Yeah, Ultimate Ninja Storm seemed to really calm down the crazy, so it appeals to me more. :P You're right. They're directly inspired from it, but I know they're lacking something. Thanks! Chak-rush is a mode from the NZC (Shinboi Rumble) game on the NDS. Basically, you have unlimited Chakra and gain Super Armor and are slightly more powerful. In the source, you can still block and do supers, but my implementation is more restrictive, because if you could do that, then you could just spam your level 3 supers, lol. -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Demitri Posted July 13, 2014 Posted July 13, 2014 Maybe do something similar to what Leo did in his Clash of Ninja Revolution sp for the clouds? If you want my released works, go here.
Алексей Posted July 13, 2014 Author Posted July 13, 2014 Ah yeah, I think those are from the game. I still haven't decided what I'm going to do with that, however I have made some adjustments: -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Алексей Posted July 14, 2014 Author Posted July 14, 2014 Here's another update. This time, it has the backdrop of the game: -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Demitri Posted July 14, 2014 Posted July 14, 2014 Nice clouds :P Maybe add a brush stroke or something under the bars? i think it could use something (but minimal) under there. Looks great though If you want my released works, go here.
Алексей Posted July 14, 2014 Author Posted July 14, 2014 Nice clouds :P Maybe add a brush stroke or something under the bars? i think it could use something (but minimal) under there. Looks great though Thanks, I shamelessly traced drew them myself. :) I'll try out some things after work today. I think I know what you mean. Brush strokes are very common. Don't want to clutter them too much. Thanks! -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Demitri Posted July 14, 2014 Posted July 14, 2014 I figured you were avoiding a cluttered look. I honestly can't think of anything else besides ninja scrolls but i have a feeling you don't want to do that either Maybe find a way to have the lifebar connect to the timer? (which would make the timer look less empty) Anyway good luck If you want my released works, go here.
Алексей Posted July 14, 2014 Author Posted July 14, 2014 I figured you were avoiding a cluttered look. I honestly can't think of anything else besides ninja scrolls but i have a feeling you don't want to do that either Maybe find a way to have the lifebar connect to the timer? (which would make the timer look less empty) Anyway good luck Right you are, lol. That's a good idea. I'll try doing something like that too. Maybe the brush stroke could come in handy there? Thanks, I'll post the update later today. -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Алексей Posted July 16, 2014 Author Posted July 16, 2014 Here's an update. Thanks Genesis for the helpful ideas. :) -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Алексей Posted July 17, 2014 Author Posted July 17, 2014 I have another update for you guys: I'm liking it more and more. -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Egnaro Posted July 19, 2014 Posted July 19, 2014 Yeah that looks much better. (just an idea)It would be cool if the ninja star spun a little while time was going down or something What are those three dots btw?
Алексей Posted July 19, 2014 Author Posted July 19, 2014 Yeah that looks much better. (just an idea)It would be cool if the ninja star spun a little while time was going down or something What are those three dots btw? Thanks! Yeah man, I was planning on having the shuriken actually spinning at all times. The three dots are the round win icons. Instead of having them show up when you win, I want them to light up, like other games do. -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Алексей Posted July 19, 2014 Author Posted July 19, 2014 I've made some color changes: What do you think? -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Demitri Posted July 19, 2014 Posted July 19, 2014 Doh! So Simple but it makes a difference Edit: I was gonna suggest trying out diff cloud colors :P If you want my released works, go here.
Алексей Posted July 19, 2014 Author Posted July 19, 2014 Doh! So Simple but it makes a difference Edit: I was gonna suggest trying out diff cloud colors :P I know right? Credit to Legend Ivanhoe for the idea. Haha, yeah, clouds belong white-ish, and they look really nice now. :P -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Алексей Posted July 27, 2014 Author Posted July 27, 2014 Hey everyone, the bars are basically done. Here's a video of them in action: http://youtu.be/acP7fOut7uc -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Алексей Posted July 28, 2014 Author Posted July 28, 2014 Yeah it looks really good. Nice job man.Thanks man! -[Все слова это только слова.]-
Kanbei Posted July 29, 2014 Posted July 29, 2014 Cool these lifebars look great will we see a video on these soon?
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