TMNT Mona_Lisa

[malovka1]

 im making is base from "ninja turtles:Mona Lisa

[Trinitronity]

I'm sorry, but that animation looks very jumpy. You might want to fix that.

[RobotMonkeyHead]

The art looks decent, but the animation could use a little work, like Trin said.
Try slowing it down a bit, getting the foot position (particularly the toes) to stay in place, and adding just a little bit of arm movement in there. Maybe some breathing, by expanding the body just a tiny bit.

Right now it looks like you have 3 frames, in the order 1,2,3,2 loop.  Try going for 5 frames.  Make a frame between 1 and 2, and another one between 2 and 3.  It's not too hard, just go back and forth between the 2 your working with and create a sort of "average" frame by just cutting pieces up and moving them a tiny bit.  Once you got your in between frames, just do the same thing with the frame order.  1, 1.5, 2, 2.5, 3, 2.5, 2, 1.5 loop.




 

[Hellzone]

i agree that the animation does need some work. but the sprite work is very good! great progress so far, i can't wait too see more

[malovka1]

bad movement I

плохо получается у меня движение

[Trinitronity]

Good think he speaks russian, because I understand that.

Basically, he said that he is bad in creating movements.

Malovka, that should not discourage you. It's just a sign for you to try again a little harder.

[Ryon]

I didnt know Mona Lisa was a turtle?

[Trinitronity]

Mona isn't a turtle, she's a different kind of reptile.

[Ryon]

ok true. shes a lizard lady.

[Trinitronity]

And definitely a better character design than Venus!

[RobotMonkeyHead]

For a little extra cheese they could have spelled her name Mona Liza.
Named after a Da Vinci, and hooked up with Raph.

[malovka1]