malovka1 Posted May 29, 2015 Share Posted May 29, 2015 im making is base from "ninja turtles:Mona Lisa Kiske Otoko and Hellzone 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitronity Posted May 29, 2015 Share Posted May 29, 2015 I'm sorry, but that animation looks very jumpy. You might want to fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobotMonkeyHead Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 The art looks decent, but the animation could use a little work, like Trin said. Try slowing it down a bit, getting the foot position (particularly the toes) to stay in place, and adding just a little bit of arm movement in there. Maybe some breathing, by expanding the body just a tiny bit. Right now it looks like you have 3 frames, in the order 1,2,3,2 loop. Try going for 5 frames. Make a frame between 1 and 2, and another one between 2 and 3. It's not too hard, just go back and forth between the 2 your working with and create a sort of "average" frame by just cutting pieces up and moving them a tiny bit. Once you got your in between frames, just do the same thing with the frame order. 1, 1.5, 2, 2.5, 3, 2.5, 2, 1.5 loop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hellzone Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 i agree that the animation does need some work. but the sprite work is very good! great progress so far, i can't wait too see more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malovka1 Posted June 2, 2015 Author Share Posted June 2, 2015 bad movement I плохо получается у меня движение Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitronity Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 Good think he speaks russian, because I understand that. Basically, he said that he is bad in creating movements. Malovka, that should not discourage you. It's just a sign for you to try again a little harder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryon Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 I didnt know Mona Lisa was a turtle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitronity Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 Mona isn't a turtle, she's a different kind of reptile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryon Posted June 4, 2015 Share Posted June 4, 2015 ok true. shes a lizard lady. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trinitronity Posted June 4, 2015 Share Posted June 4, 2015 And definitely a better character design than Venus! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobotMonkeyHead Posted June 5, 2015 Share Posted June 5, 2015 For a little extra cheese they could have spelled her name Mona Liza. Named after a Da Vinci, and hooked up with Raph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malovka1 Posted August 2, 2015 Author Share Posted August 2, 2015 Kiske Otoko 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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