DRB Origins mugen Series

[DevilRaptorB]

a Mugen story series im working on, hope you guys enjoy, just wanted to share it with you, and before you say it, yes im well aware of the grammar errors here and there , atleast in the early episodes

act 1

Epo 1

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHBM97JRNLE&list=PLD509EDDBE11950BC&index=1&feature=plpp_video

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epo 2

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=IsED8bivV1M&feature=relmfu

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epo 3

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-xOg73Y6rM&feature=related

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epo 4

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=b6lbt5tUMBY&feature=relmfu

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epo 5

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6HnLW6UW6Q&feature=watch_response

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epo 6

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wsja-b2ZKOE&feature=watch_response

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epo 7

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=_gtS_-BOkAk&feature=watch_response

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epo 8

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=1R7NZumHFoE&feature=watch_response

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epo 9

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=42fjyuBBmsQ&feature=watch_response

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epo 10

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAqRpTkELqg&feature=watch_response

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epo 11

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0zdRgteKcM&feature=watch_response

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epo 12

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=FC5cQbNQyd0&feature=watch_response

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epo 13 part 1

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=G1Vp61cs8B0&feature=watch_response

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epo 13 part 2

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIQZgBbyVN4&feature=watch_response

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epo 14

part 1

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMzAIaJzLLo&feature=watch_response

part 2

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=3EzbM524BkQ&feature=watch_response

part 3

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=GOfCf5zoNPE&feature=watch_response

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epo 15

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=Em1KFSsQsyw&feature=watch_response

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epo 16

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=2iOOZ4tIf-g&feature=watch_response

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epo 17

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0nsNj0VXl4&feature=watch_response

epo 18

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=UH4KeMZWXe4&feature=watch_response

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epo 19 part 1 [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WuJ-iTBR3rw&feature=my_liked_videos&list=LLVbDK3CfpcdIJJHe-4Buv6w

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epo 19 removed

replaced with an HD fixed version

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the 2nd part of Epo 19, yaa I know it took a while this was done on a hurry , the next one may be my last or not depending on how my life well goes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZePBDGX4KeI&feature=my_liked_videos&list=LLVbDK3CfpcdIJJHe-4Buv6w

[chimukun]

just watched the 1st ep. its a lil slow paced for my taste, and predictable(most mugen fanfic are). but i'm also a little tired and dont really feel like digesting info too well. also get a better video editing program, u should enlarge the vid a little and not show the lifebars, since its 1 hit kill anyways. i might post my own series 18r. which like or hate will be the most original thing any1's ever seen in a mugen fanfic. dont really feel like looking it up atm though, and it doesnt seem like too many ppl reply to these threads here.

[DevilRaptorB]

thank for the advices, well if your series is a most original then by all mean I think you should post it, caz there are people who indeed are intrested in these mugen series and fanfict

[chimukun]

k, i just like being a little hard and giving constructive criticism, instead of praising everything. glad you didnt take it as offensive. I'm probably going to watch some more eps on ur series, as well as the other fanfic vids posted here. & compare them. posted my series, check out the topic on panty thief mysteries, so give some replies

[DevilRaptorB]

I don't take opinions in an offensive way , I always keep believing that not all people would find something great or bad , well be sure to check the series, but honestly im not that great with given feedbacks, but well try my best