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You left debug on. 

 

Not a huge deal but you have uncropped sprites (very small issue considering your stage isn't large at all.) 

 

Since there's no animation, the flow of the stage really relies on the deltas which IMO need adjustment. They're interesting but they move very oddly. 

 

Lots of aesthetic/graphical work could be done to this to make it more "pretty." 

 

Not a bad stage for what I assume is a first? You should make more. 

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The emptiness will haunt you.
 
 

 

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You left debug on. 

 

Not a huge deal but you have uncropped sprites (very small issue considering your stage isn't large at all.) 

 

Since there's no animation, the flow of the stage really relies on the deltas which IMO need adjustment. They're interesting but they move very oddly. 

 

Lots of aesthetic/graphical work could be done to this to make it more "pretty." 

 

Not a bad stage for what I assume is a first? You should make more. 

maybe i'll gonna make stage soon..i must finish ryoucchi's request 

#plakkk XD

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